tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18651753.post6917334880765479325..comments2024-03-25T02:34:22.742+05:30Comments on i am useless: The Sculptor's Taleghetufoolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10180437940833356902noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18651753.post-73977198030545496652013-09-15T14:38:40.354+05:302013-09-15T14:38:40.354+05:30While the mood lasts, you might consider also chan...While the mood lasts, you might consider also changing "me, and my future generations" to "I, and my future generations"; "keep their hands busy" to "keep our hands busy".<br /><br />Sorry to be so annoying; but it's what I do best.Vincenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18297306807695767580noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18651753.post-56165947224307584442013-09-15T13:41:19.524+05:302013-09-15T13:41:19.524+05:30changed those three damned words. my mood permitte...changed those three damned words. my mood permitted so much till now. ghetufoolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10180437940833356902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18651753.post-87779531646180818592013-09-12T17:16:35.255+05:302013-09-12T17:16:35.255+05:30I will, "If my mood permits" and also af...I will, "If my mood permits" and also after the promised leaner/fatter version has been delivered to me with a cheque of suitable value.Vincenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18297306807695767580noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18651753.post-3707779333022742742013-09-12T14:47:42.114+05:302013-09-12T14:47:42.114+05:30Please edit it.Please edit it.ghetufoolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10180437940833356902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18651753.post-12861482109552788932013-09-12T14:06:15.713+05:302013-09-12T14:06:15.713+05:30Ha! So you spurn my freely-offered editorial servi...Ha! So you spurn my freely-offered editorial services, but place your trust in a robotic spell-checker, which betrays you before the entire world. Mahatma Gandhi, champion of homespun, would have despaired.<br /><br />Portrayed should be portrait.<br />Monk’s like should be monk’s life.<br />my disciplines should be my disciples.<br /><br />Anyhow, I enjoyed this draft. It reads like a legend or fairy-tale full of personal symbolism, a kind of Indian rendition of something like the myth of Oedipus. But more particularly it dramatizes the male life-cycle of rebellion against the father, wanting to kill the king as substitute for the father; but in the end realizing that he has become just like the father.<br /><br />The world with bated breath waits for the leaner/fatter version whose author has re-read it after writing and before publication.Vincenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18297306807695767580noreply@blogger.com