Thursday, August 16, 2012

The eternal moment (complete)

Rewriting ...


deepworld said...

eagerly waiting for the remaining part :)

Vincent said...

" But he again counted till ten. One, two, three, four ... ten. And it was over. And again there was one till he finally realised he is actually a scoundrel."

Or not a scoundrel at all but a homosexual who doesn't know it yet. I understand they exist, especially in certain traditional societies.

Excuse me for such a comment which may be completely alien to the eternal moment. But please grant your fictional characters the freedom to be themselves and not tied to the ideas & prejudices of their author.